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Twin Embers

Sat Oct 25, 2008, 4:57 PM
to my queen

twin embers

what we both know and what we long to say
is a miracle that is eating me alive day by day
what we both hold, we twin embers of the flame
these lives wernt ment to save the world it was never ours
anyway...........

we treat ourselves so bad, today the masochists unite
just in case you lie tonight ill be there to believe you
the day it all comes down crashing around you
in amber rain the sky will fall to seas of pain behind your eyes

ive always chased this feelin and i wont hesitate
and by my own admission its compleatly INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!


we seed the hopeless lives, to augment the bleakest scene, with light
just in case you hide tonight ill be there to retrieve you
when it all comes down, ending around you
in violet shades the night will fall to seize the pain behind your smile

ive always chased this feelin and i wont hesitate
and by my own admission its compleatly INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!

cant you see the consequence
this simply isn't happenstance
the fact you make me feel so fucking good it hurts
but what we both know we twin embers of the flame
our lives weren't meant to save a world that was never ours anyway.

we will shine like the darkest spot upon the sun

cant you see the consequence
this simply isn't happenstance
the fact you make me feel so fucking good it hurts
but what we both know we twin embers of the flame
our lives wernt ment to save a world that was never ours anyway.

what we both know and what we long to say
is a miracle that is eating me alive day by day
what we both hold, we twin dancers of the flame
these lives were built on fairy tales aren't ours to live anyway.....

  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: Twin Embers
  • Reading: Espresso
  • Watching: Espresso
  • Playing: Espresso
  • Eating: Espresso
  • Drinking: Espresso

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:iconenskie:
There is a literature category on this site...

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Love or Hate
Anger or Sate
Feel the soothing lotion
Of our combined =RawEm0tion

The consciousness of being at war, and therefore in danger, makes the handing-over of all power to a small caste seem the natural, unavoidable condition of survival.
:iconelsweyrone:
eh? oh...you mean i should post this as a deviation and not just a journal?

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...closer to the dawn
:iconenskie:
I guess so, it was just an observation, don't get me wrong, I liked the poem, just seems a little odd placing it in a journal. Though I suppose people can see it with greater ease.

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Love or Hate
Anger or Sate
Feel the soothing lotion
Of our combined =RawEm0tion

The consciousness of being at war, and therefore in danger, makes the handing-over of all power to a small caste seem the natural, unavoidable condition of survival.
:iconelsweyrone:
cool. they're actually lyrics.

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...closer to the dawn
:iconenskie:
Your own work, or somebody else's?

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Love or Hate
Anger or Sate
Feel the soothing lotion
Of our combined =RawEm0tion

The consciousness of being at war, and therefore in danger, makes the handing-over of all power to a small caste seem the natural, unavoidable condition of survival.
:iconelsweyrone:
mine.

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...closer to the dawn
:iconenskie:
Mmm, normally if you write something then you'd submit it to your gallery, while the work of others would be put in a journal with a reference. Your choice of course, I'm not criticising your judgement, just struck me as odd is all.

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Love or Hate
Anger or Sate
Feel the soothing lotion
Of our combined =RawEm0tion

The consciousness of being at war, and therefore in danger, makes the handing-over of all power to a small caste seem the natural, unavoidable condition of survival.
:iconelsweyrone:
no offense taken. id didnt put it in my gallery cause it has a beeter place for its application...........[link]

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...closer to the dawn

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